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Re: TOP TEN WORST BOOKS
I've never read Jane Eyre but I saw the play Jane Eyre: The Musical . (I didn't want to...I was dragged to it.) The actors and stuff did a good ...
Dec 31, 2004 -
Re: TOP TEN WORST BOOKS
I hated The Amber Spyglass . The first two books were so much better.
Dec 30, 2004 -
Re: TOP TEN WORST BOOKS
I don't like Great Expectations . I agree that The Oddysey (sp?) sucks, too.
Dec 29, 2004 -
Re: Dedications
I rarely dedicate stuff I write. My cowriter and I (actually she wrote most of it) dedicated our first novel to our third-grade teacher, not because we liked her (we ...
Dec 28, 2004 -
Re: TOP TEN WORST BOOKS
1. Lord of the Flies by William Goling 2. Of Nightingales That Weep by Katherine Patterson 3. Things Fall Apart by Chinua Achebe
Dec 28, 2004 -
Re: Most School Aged Children Have Imaginary Friends
I never really did the whole imaginary friend thing. Actually in first or second grade or so, I remember practically everybody else I went to school with had an imaginary ...
Dec 28, 2004 -
Re: Poor Man's Copyright
But the second you write something, it's copyright by you, right?
Dec 23, 2004 -
Re: Unreasonable Progress (Edited)
Thanks for the comments, you guys. This is the rest of the first chapter: # My parents sent me out of the state because she said so. It was insane! ...
Dec 21, 2004 -
Re: Seeker of the Blade
The title seems...Corny. Cliched. Something. I don't know, it's probably just my opinion; maybe lots of people like it. After all, Randy said it caught his eye. I really like ...
Dec 21, 2004 -
Re: School Spirit
Jason then pulled a chipped bone from his pocket and with a hunting knife, he began to carve a name. What is he carving the name into? You don’t know ...
Dec 21, 2004 -
Re: Road Trip - School Spirit Continuation
“I can’t believe you talked me into this.” Thomas moaned from behind the wheel of his parent’s brand new 2004 Dodge Grand Caravan. Cherry red. Just waxed. Super-clean interior. He ...
Dec 21, 2004 -
Re: Snow
He had stopped shivering long ago. This sentence is in past tense, whereas the rest is in present. Personally I think you should put the whole thing in past tense, ...
Dec 21, 2004 -
Re: Road Trip - School Spirit Continuation
I like it so far. It's kind of funny. You might want to say what Jason and Marie look like, though--and maybe show more about Rocky and Thomas look like ...
Dec 18, 2004 -
Re: Sixteen comrades, and the house of the dying man.
I started a critique on this on Thursday but when I tried to send it the computer messed up and it didn't work. Hopefully it will this time. I like ...
Dec 18, 2004 -
Re: Unreasonable Progress (Edited)
Don't read this if you are offended by swearing. I gave it a PG13 rating for the language, but it's fine if younger people read it. I just gave it ...
Dec 17, 2004
